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PostSubject: Horror Rap/ Poem   January 26th 2011, 2:04 am

Hey guys, this is a horror poem I had to write for one of the classes I'm taking......
Before you read the poem, read this.
1. I don't sit around in a dark dungeon thorugh the gloomy night, writing disturbing poems by candlelight while listening death metal music. Or do I? Twisted Evil . Jk, I just wanted some of your opinions and insight about the rap/ poem.
2. The poem has some religious relgious references but I am in NO way a "Bible thumper" or a Christian. I wrote the poem to poke fun at those kinds of people actually..... Nor am I some kind of Satanist or freaky devil worshipper lol. I kind of believe in a mix of deism and agnosticism. I feel too lazy to explain what those are so look it up yourself. tongue

Enjoy! (Or run away from me, screaming that there's something wrong with me) Very Happy



The fearsome beast, howling to the skies
The satisfaction he felt at hearing their pitiful cries
He left their corpses in the ditches, covered with diseased flies
A million murders, matricides, lies
Not one of these crimes compare to the ones commited by the Terrible One
His very presence turned the flowers to ashes and darkened the crimson Sun
Rotting flesh, carnage, putrid maggots, and pain
All by Him were brutally slain
The droplets of blood of a thousand infants fell down as rain
Bathing their mothers in the lifeblood of their offspring
Throughout the bleak city their soul-piercing screams did ring
Then came the flames, writhing and twisting, scorching and crimson red
Most were consumed by the vast raging inferno and others fled
Those that ran were swallowed in the obsidian, unpenetrable Fog
They were found years later, frozen solid, stiff as a log
Their emaciated corpses, sickly and a dark blue
Their innards and mortal shells in the abyss, churning like a boiling stew
Hollow-eyed spirits, they could not resist temptation
Condemned for their mortal sins, bound to eternal Damnation
They pleaded and groveled for someone that could bring them salvation
Then came the fateful man, clad in gleaming armor
Unmatched in ferocity, temerity, and valor
An aura of raw energy seemed to emanate from his being
His glowing presence caused the blind to once again resume seeing
The darknened chambers and crypts were filled with dazzling light at his arrival
All seemed well, until out of the sinister shadows came a distorted beast, it was His rival
An ever changing abomination, shifting, contorting, the Master of Death
On the other side of the Void, the Messiah, ready to fight to the last breath
For the epic struggle over Time between the two sides of man
One side, which will love and care, the other, which will slaughter for the tiniest plot of land
Finally, the two behemoths clashed at the center of the Abyss
The answer is up to you, who will win; the Sinful or the Sinless?
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   January 26th 2011, 6:16 pm

Hey good gore ! the poem
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   January 26th 2011, 6:26 pm

nice lol u should send this in to one of those poem contest i bet it would win
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   January 30th 2011, 12:23 am

CC:

obsidian, impenetrable fog --too many adjectives, pick one. using both removes the flow and rhythm . also you spelled impenetrable wrong

sickly and a dark blue--- remove "a". it will sound better

murders, matricides, lies -- remove lies, it seems comical when compared to murder and mother-killing. also, matricide is a form of murder, but they still sound good next to each other, so leave them I'm just nitpicking. come up with a horrible act to replace lies.

you spelled darkened wrong


all in all a very good poem! good job man

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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   January 30th 2011, 3:30 am

talk about a critic lol
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   January 30th 2011, 3:41 am

what? he asked for opinions and insight. CC= contructive criticism
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   January 30th 2011, 1:53 pm

lmao
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   January 30th 2011, 3:30 pm

i got a poem but idk if its a horror poem but ok here it goes.......See you smiling everyday..hide the way i feel..want to tell you everything..but my lips are sealed..loving you with all my heart..but you will never know..feelings for u are locked away..hope they never go away..i never cease to be amazed..how beautiful you look..now my heart will suffer in silence.. because of the chance i never took..... =,(
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   January 30th 2011, 5:37 pm

well that poem kinda describes me cuz i really like a girl at school but shes kind of a slut and im trying to tell her wut i feel but when shes close to me talking to my friend i kinda freeze and i just stare at her and stay quiet
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   February 1st 2011, 12:12 am

Boxer: write a poem and post it here about the issue your having

also: make a funny poem about cats
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   February 1st 2011, 7:52 am

cats lmfao no man idk anything about cats kittens and their mittens lDK but r u serious man r u under the influence or sum shit duke?
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   February 1st 2011, 6:02 pm

Class!
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   February 7th 2011, 10:58 pm

XD rofl
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   February 10th 2011, 8:49 pm

DAVE_B0XER1 wrote:
XD rofl
NO point of Spamming
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   February 13th 2011, 10:35 pm

spamming?!?
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   February 14th 2011, 1:29 pm

DAVE_B0XER1 wrote:
spamming?!?
The irony is killing me.
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   February 14th 2011, 5:15 pm

Do U know the Muffin Man? ?!?The Muffin Man?!? The Muffin Man!!!! srry ppl i just wanted to copy of the cookie from Shrek
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   March 29th 2011, 12:49 am

Mr_Waffle wrote:
DAVE_B0XER1 wrote:
spamming?!?
The irony is killing me.

that isn't irony. =P
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   March 29th 2011, 7:15 am

yes i know him
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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   April 3rd 2011, 12:09 am

Here's my 4-line poem.

My name is Jamie.
I am so horny.
I get laid by my girlfriend Izabellah Tomasetti.
And now I'm happy.


LOL, I got bored. Sorry brahs. Made some errors in here name too so you don't Facebook her LOL :L

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PostSubject: Re: Horror Rap/ Poem   April 3rd 2011, 2:21 am

Roses are red
Grass is green
Open your legs
And I'll fill you with cream

Hickory diccory dock
This bitch was suckin' my cock
The clock struck two
I dumped my goo
And dumped her to the end of the block
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